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You woke up to light streaming through your window. Your eyelids fluttered open, and you heard the delicate sizzle of breakfast being made. Through the door, you could hear Alec's muffled humming. You again felt Kid's kiss on your forehead, and you couldn't help but have a smile curl on your lips.

You yawned and gave a pitiful look to your now-crumpled dress. Silently, you scuffled out of your bedroom, muttering about how your feet hurt from those darned heels yesterday.

In the kitchen, Alec's back was facing you. As always, he was working aggressively at the pan as he whipped up some bacon and eggs. He didn't turn his back to address you with a joking remark.

"Morning, sleeping beauty. How was your beauty sleep? Going to pay even more attention to it now that you've got a boyfriend around?" His aggresive arm motions hesitated, and Alec turned to face you with his signature grin.

You rubbed your eyes and smiled softly. "He isn't officially my boyfriend, Alec. And I'd prefer you not go around saying that!!"

"I think I just might, now that you said that." Again, without looking, Alec kicked open the trash can and flung a few egg shells into it. Lord, he was a cooking pro. And then there was you, who you joked to everyone could set fire by trying to pour a glass of milk.

"You better not, Alec. You should know better seeing as I've got some great things to tell Kim."

Alec's head whipped around. "You wouldn't dare."

You smiled sinisterly, throwing your feet onto the kitchen table as you sat back nonchalantly in your chair. "Baldwin you KNOW I would."

He laughed. "I know you would, but not to me anyway. You love me too much."

"I do, hon'." You smiled as Alec set  your breakfast in front of you. "Thanks for making this for me. I woke up so late, you really didn't have to do this!"

Whatever your partner was about to say next is lost, because at that moment your apartment door flung open.

The Thompson sisters stood heaving in front of you two. At first they looked rabid, but when their eyes landed on you, they're countenance turned to absolute delight.

"SIQRUSE!!!" Patty screamed, throwing her arms around you. Liz plodded over to the table, an excited "Big Sis" smile painted onto her pretty face.

"What the heck did you DO to him, Siqruse??" Liz asked.

"Yeah! Kid's actin' all weird!" Patty giggled, her hand in front of her face in that cutesy way of hers.

You had no idea what they were talking about. "Wha—Huh?!"

Liz and Patty smiled at each other. "Kid came home last night and fell asleep on the couch he was so tired, so we didn't get to talk about the date. But this morning, he was in such a daze he didn't even hear me tell him that his shirt collar was uneven. He keeps sighing and staring into space. What'd you do?!?"

You could feel your face turn crimson red. "Well… uh… not what I did really, more like what he did… He kind of… kissed me on the forehead?" You looked up shyly.

Liz and Patty stood in shock, staring at you as if you'd committed a crime.

"In the middle of my forehead, so it was symmetrical…?" For some reason you thought adding this would help.

Still they were standing silent.

Then Patty and Liz squealed so loud you thought your ears would bleed.

"HE DID WHAT?!?" Liz and Patty jumped up and down in delight, holding each other's hands.

You couldn't help but laugh giddily and squeal with delight as well. Liz and Patty were playing Big Sister, getting so excited over her first date. Of course, kissing a girl on the forehead seemed merely impossible for the limits of Death the Kid, so the Thompson sisters were brimming with happiness that their partner finally found someone he liked.

"Well phase two of our plan can be checked off, sis!" Patty laughed.

You looked at the sisters confusedly. "What?"

Liz exchanged a glance with her the younger Thompson. "Ever since you came to the Academy, Kid's been practically obsessing over you. I'm surprised you didn't notice. Patty and I were talking in my room about a week after you came, Siqruse, and we set up a sort of…" She smiled at Patty, "…Plan, to get you and Kid together. Phase 1 was getting you guys on a date. And now, phase 2 is done – getting him to kiss you!"

Patty raised a finger. "Somewhere NOT on the lips though. That's number 3."
The tenth chapter to my Kid x You fanfiction. Dumb fanfiction.net doesn't let you write reader-as-character stories, SO it's on dA.

Sorry it took so long! I've been DISGUSTINGLY busy. It was only until *sweeneytoddluvver12 kicked my lazy arse that I got this done. XD lmao

I don't own Kid. Or Maka, Soul, Tsubaki, Black*Star, etc. They are (C) Atsushi Ohkubo

Siqruse, Alec, etc. are (C) Me, Crystal Cooper

:iconpweaseplz: Comment, favorite, whatever!!!

Ch. 9: [link]
Ch. 11: [link]
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:iconjeweledart:
JeweledArt Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Spaz attack 
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mikuhasunefan Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Student Writer
o my god i think i love this even more yay :)
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kibby99 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
For gods sake Patty chill out
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Kekebel Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
HOW MANY MORE PHASES ARE THERE?!?!?
Lol, I can just imagine Patty's face in the last line
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Shiruba-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Liz, Patty, did I ever tell you how awesome you both are?!
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Sporks-And-Knives Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
xD Patty and Liz make me laugh
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
haha good to know I'm keeping them in character! x
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AkiLightAngel742 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Student Artist
omsc......
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DragonLover1234 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are a symmetrical GENIUS :'D
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012
I'm a genius? And better yet, I'm symmetrical?!!? This is the most fantastic compliment I have yet recieved! :hug:
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
I LOVE UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU KID! eeekkkkeeekkkkeeeekkkkeeekkkk! I think i just died and went to heaven! crystalcooper, u are a genius!
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
hahahah thank you SO much hon'! <3 Such a sweet compliment, thank you!
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
ur welcome!!!!!! thank you for making an 30 minutes of my life amazin'!! im gonna read this all over again now
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012
Awww thank you <3 You're so sweet! x
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012
:D thank u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u r too!!!
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012
Aw, thanks hun. <3
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deaththekidiscute Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
i got kisseeeedddd byyyy kiiiiddddeeeehhhhh *fangirl highe pitch squel*
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
:DD Yes you did! :D
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coopup14 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011
Hey can I ask one quick question .... How do you say siqruse's name
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner May 22, 2011
Ah, yes. It's pronounced SI (as in the word "sigh") Kroos (Like the word "crew" with an 'ss' sound tagged on the end)

I tried to use a more difficult name so, no matter what kind of name the reader has, in context it will sound good. :)
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coopup14 Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
Thanks a bunch for telling me now I can read about my favorite pairing an actually say her name right
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011
No problem! Any time. :)
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FerbGuy101 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2010
it's amazing how you make this slow and steady instead of rushing for that retared kiss, lock, and death
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010
Thank you so much! ^^

It always irritates me in fanfiction when things go way too fast! I've read SO many that I thought would be okay, but two days after the characters meet they're practically married. xD
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FerbGuy101 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010
lol I agree
Don't you hate fanfictions that completely ruin a characters persona
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
Oh yeah, that's annoying too. It's like they're too focused on getting their fangirl tendencies out of their heads that they forget how the characters act.
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FerbGuy101 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
KId's one of the harder charater to write about because you really have to squint on what his persona is like besides OCPD and seriousness, I tend to read the wiki article to see what other people notice that I don't
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
Yeah, that usually works. Kid, I find, is a lot like my friend (who loves him, funny enough) So when I need to picture how he acts without his obsessive tendencies, I talk to her for a little while. xD
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FerbGuy101 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011
Shows like soul eater usually don't brodcast in my area so non of my friends really know it, the problem with kid is that they have repeated jokes for him, it's almost always the OCD topic. I feel kid doesn't really get enough sceen time but they say he's the "main character" so I guess Blackstar and kid are actually more "sub-character" lol
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011
Yeah, for me it's hard to find a cable that has anime on it... And yeah, they always seem to obsess over his OCD topic, but there IS more to him than just that. EXACTLY! And I personally hate Maka -- she just annoys the absolute crap out of me, so I wish Kid and Blackstar could have more screentime than her so they actually could be considered main characters. hahaha they kind of are sub-characters bahah xD
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aurpan Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
WHAT A NICE STORY! :3
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2010
Aw thank you! :D :tighthug:
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Keeper-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2010  Student Artist
FIRST ONE!!! EPIC!! ANYWAY....................... AWESOMENESS...... Yes miraculously I am still ali- GODDAMMIT GIR NO~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*BOOOM!*
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2010
hahahah xD Thank you!!!!

NO GIR NO. Bad Gir!! *Gir gives me sad face*
... I LOVE YOU GIR!! *hugs Gir*

xD Ahhh.
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Keeper-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2010  Student Artist
Gir:Hee heee
Me:*Dying*L-little.Help.Here?
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010
Oh I'm sorry!! *helps you*
Gir, go watch TV.

Gir: OKIE DOKIE!
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Keeper-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010  Student Artist
Me:Free! For at least three seconds
Gir:IZ WANTZ WAFFLEZ!!!!
Me:Okay Gir okay
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
kekekek :D Gir I can make you some tacos too ! :D
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Keeper-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011  Student Artist
Gir:YAY!! TACOS!!!
Me:*Walks into the kitchen for teh waffles*
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crystalcooper Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
*hands Gir Tacos*
Eat them after you eat the delicious waffles Keeper-Chan was so nice to have made you. :D
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